martes, 28 de octubre de 2008

A Frightening Story by Arturo Sepúlveda Ayala

I'm going to to tell a story that I heard of one of my friends. Actually we don´t know if it´s true or just a tale.
One night of Halloween, in order to get some fun, a group of teenagers played the ouija. The night was cold and the air had a strange smell. They were in one of the boys’ house and his family had an old ouija which had belong to his great-grandmother. This woman had already dead by the time the boy was born so he never met her. The boy said he wanted to talk with her and that is the reason why he was playing this weird game.

The play began between laughters but this boy was really serious and concentrated. Suddenly a lightning fell and the whole dark room got illuminated and then the thunder made them tremble. All was quiet. The needle started to move and they asked who was moving it but nobody answered.

The needle moved without stoping, from one side to another, with no word pattern. It stopped and slowly formed the next words: “I´m coming for you”.

Somebody knocked the door but anyone wanted to open, they just heard the voice from a person outside: it was a woman who was in the corridor asking to enter. The door was locked but it seemed this woman was about to crash it. She was screaming like a crazy person so they pushed the sofa to keep the room locked. She didn´t stop to scream very loudly and the boy could hear her saying his name.

Then he realized she was his great-grandmother. He knew it but he couldn´t explain why.

He really wanted to open the door. He wished to see her but his friends managed to stop him. The noise was over but in that moment the girl of the group had a fit of hysterics. They tried to console her but with a strong and low voice she said “don´t come” . They were shocked.

The outside woman´s voice said ” I told you and you didn´t want to listen, now you will die” The girl started to move very abrubt and she said she would kill them. They tried to open the door but they couldn´t. The boy got out but the rest of the group didn´t. He heard his friend´s horrifying screams asking for help and kicking the door.

He wrote this history 45 years later. He has just went out of prission accused of killing his friends, which he found them died when he opened his room´s door.

1 comentario:

Verónica Poujol dijo...

Hi Arturo! Your ideas of posting original scary stories was great!.

The mark for your story is: 10